Tutor feedback

I feel very disappointed after my feedback on the last assignment. I felt that I had managed to mount my work well. I do understand the comments regarding the ‘messages and meanings’ sheet. This is a story board and consequently is work I mounted during the course. I had not invested in a metal ruler cutting sheet and knife at this point and I had admittedly used scissors.

I have now remounted this board and I feel that it now looks less cluttered and more coherent.